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Jun 23, 2010
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YEAR OF THE CAT
Chinese New Year- Falling in Love
Standing in the gloom
of the room
your male presence
mesmerises
like in the middle of
a kaleidoscope
now the room
revolves around
your face
patterns
shapes all
juxtapositioned
the epicentre of
your dark being
In that moment
you were imprinted
onto me
no code cracker
has the key
to unravel what
this word means
to me
d-e-l-i-c-i-o-u-s
You said this
was one of 'my' words
You liked me to
slowly roll
it over my
tongue
Made you smile
like the creamy Cheshire cat
No-one else
liked my deliciousness
quite the way
you did
Standing in the gloom
of the room
your male presence
mesmerises
like in the middle of
a kaleidoscope
now the room
revolves around
your face
patterns
shapes all
juxtapositioned
the epicentre of
your dark being
In that moment
you were imprinted
onto me
no code cracker
has the key
to unravel what
this word means
to me
d-e-l-i-c-i-o-u-s
You said this
was one of 'my' words
You liked me to
slowly roll
it over my
tongue
Made you smile
like the creamy Cheshire cat
No-one else
liked my deliciousness
quite the way
you did
— panaella, Jun 23, 2010
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Critiques
Natania
15 years 11 months ago
cool
panaella
15 years 11 months ago
thank you
themoonman
15 years 11 months ago
Me too...
panaella
15 years 11 months ago
thanks
panaella
15 years 11 months ago
revision
themoonman
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Ells...
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
if this is leading up to one of your hot writes ellie
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Ell's
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
P.S I love Richards
raj
15 years 11 months ago
Hi Ells
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