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Jun 30, 2010
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The Heir - The Air
E(x)ternal imagined, its energy in-min[(e)(d)]. Equable in-vision:
Impervious eyes. Well faired. in warm winter – Air Is – in-hailed
Then air is. Ex-hailed. Air is. In-took and then is: ex-spelled.
Ex-halting the air – The Heir – Is the(a)ir:
Revoltened. Resinous. Residue;
Re-cyclic remains are rightly returned
Re-changing the flame – re-chaining;
Re-claiming the same: a gain
Again and a gain and again;
Re-naming the smoulders of rain.
The game is plain:- Inside.
In side it is plain – plain’ with his zein; again. And outside
It’s plain – in Time. Out side it’s plain’ in va(e)in.
In place and on going, it’s gone from the main…
Gone from the main – it trains,
Its lefting the brain:
De-maim.
De-maim, de-suffer – de-suffer the slain.
In-sain’
It’s writing whats left in the brain:
Surrender - a stroke – an inking is spoke
And summonsed a slithery snake
A snake scent to spin
Sneak, swirl and seduce:
A snake scent to strike at the fire.
Soothing; its scolding -
A soul is evolving -
Bandaged by burning: desire.
Impervious eyes. Well faired. in warm winter – Air Is – in-hailed
Then air is. Ex-hailed. Air is. In-took and then is: ex-spelled.
Ex-halting the air – The Heir – Is the(a)ir:
Revoltened. Resinous. Residue;
Re-cyclic remains are rightly returned
Re-changing the flame – re-chaining;
Re-claiming the same: a gain
Again and a gain and again;
Re-naming the smoulders of rain.
The game is plain:- Inside.
In side it is plain – plain’ with his zein; again. And outside
It’s plain – in Time. Out side it’s plain’ in va(e)in.
In place and on going, it’s gone from the main…
Gone from the main – it trains,
Its lefting the brain:
De-maim.
De-maim, de-suffer – de-suffer the slain.
In-sain’
It’s writing whats left in the brain:
Surrender - a stroke – an inking is spoke
And summonsed a slithery snake
A snake scent to spin
Sneak, swirl and seduce:
A snake scent to strike at the fire.
Soothing; its scolding -
A soul is evolving -
Bandaged by burning: desire.
— Damo, Jun 30, 2010
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Kailashana
15 years 11 months ago
I can only smile and bow in
Damo
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks!
mona
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Damo
Seren
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Damo
mona
15 years 11 months ago
Ops,Sorry
mona
15 years 11 months ago
And oh
Damo
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks again
judyanne
15 years 11 months ago
if picasso had used words.....
Shula
15 years 11 months ago
The Heir- the Air
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