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barbsdad2003
Jul 01, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

morning drifts in

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morning
drifts
in

riding a silvered
moon stapling a pale-blue sky
to heaven; fledgling

robins play Catch Me
If You Can on the patio;
the sun's up ... almost

==
— barbsdad2003, Jul 01, 2010

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Shula

15 years 11 months ago

Morning....................

I loved this poem,it says everything one needs to display dawn ,Have you written more and where can I find them?
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barbsdad2003

15 years 11 months ago

Glad ...

to see you're aboard. I have only a couple minutes available at this moment, won't be accessing computer again till Tuesday or later. My poetry's never been published, with the exception of a small handful at a senior citizens' local monthly (all gratis, no profit from it moneywise). Been learning as I go. Though I have been at this site for now, I think, several years. So if you go to my full profile, you'll find a list of many pieces here posted. I'm impressed with what you say on your profile page. Very. Your experience, background, maturity can bring much to the site. Enrich it tremendously. Thanx, Chuck
loved

loved

15 years 11 months ago

i am a late riser

.........u help me see the sunrise and life at dawn all i know about dawn is this i had a friend when i was young SHE WAS NAMED DAWN hence i imagine every lovely morn must be a most beautiful DAWN lovely intense poetic words.... urs
Kailashana

Kailashana

15 years 11 months ago

Lovely heart risings, Chuck.

Lovely heart risings, Chuck. Admire the brevity, tone and quality of your words. ~A The whole modern world has divided itself into Conservatives and Progressives. The business of Progressives is to go on making mistakes. The business of the Conservatives is to prevent the mistakes from being corrected. G.K. Chesteron
faerybeki

faerybeki

15 years 11 months ago

What Anna said! ;) and… I

What Anna said! ;) and... I particularly like the sky being stapled to heaven. You capture this time of day perfectly Chuck. much love Beki xxx

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