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QUISLING

I sit opposite
the face of a child
so exquisite
my heart breaks
to touch it

But that cannot be
for I am a mentor
and trusted
guide
to do so
would be taboo

But it's his face
I see in the curve of
her chin
turn of her nose
flutter of her eye

She's my friend
'my greatest foe
is my greatest love'

She asks for council
I give it
she asks for truth 
I withhold it
for the Quisling
inside me
weeps
rages
brokenhearted
at the irony

I teach your
child
it could have been
ours
— panaella, Jul 07, 2010

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Geezer

Geezer

15 years 11 months ago

I liked the slow twist...

this one provided. Nice job! I was impressed with lines of : But it's [her]face I see in the curve of her chin, turn of her nose, flutter of her eye. I could see it clearly. ~ Great work, ~ Geezer P.S. I know it was in the male context, but wanted to see it in the feminine version. It works equally well. Awesome work!
judyanne

judyanne

15 years 11 months ago

so haunting

and beautifully written ellie nominated - just a little grammer typo 'it could of been ours' ('of' to 'have') love judy xxxx http://www.strategicpublishinggroup.com/title/TwentyMyPrettyPonies.html
Seren

Seren

15 years 11 months ago

Dear Ell's

beautifully poignant piece huni bravo love and big hugs JayCee x x x (Quote~~"It is by universal misunderstanding that all agree. For if, by ill luck, people understood each other, they would never agree. "--Charles Baudelaire)

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