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Jul 12, 2010
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you smell
==
you
smell
of lemon or could
sumac it be
of anise
or licorice
of cinnamon or
allspice is it
of garlic
or onion
no
matter
I love the
you smell of
notwithstanding
==
you
smell
of lemon or could
sumac it be
of anise
or licorice
of cinnamon or
allspice is it
of garlic
or onion
no
matter
I love the
you smell of
notwithstanding
==
— barbsdad2003, Jul 12, 2010
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smell
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Hah!
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