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Jul 15, 2010
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If a Mere Golf Ball (Plutonic Sonnets 156)
If a mere golf ball represents the Sun
At Yankee Stadium’s home plate, we know
A trip to Neptune would take a home run;
And the next star would be in Chicago!
Such is the size and emptiness of space.
In search of something solid, shall we turn
To matter? Well, supposing we replace
Our Sun with golf-ball nucleus, we learn
That centered, its electrons, far afield,
Would haunt the stadium’s remote recesses.
The Cosmos thus appears to stand revealed
As but the union of two emptinesses!
I think Democritus might feel annoyed
To hear how filled the atoms are with void.
— Rob Graber, Jul 15, 2010
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professor
15 years 11 months ago
Dear Rob
Rob Graber
15 years 11 months ago
Thanks very much indeed!
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