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A Little Poesy
I opened the curtain and smiled.
“Good morning, Friday!”
On my early walk, I smiled
at the mourning dove strutting
in front of me, its wings whistling
as it flew away.
A most delightful grin
spread across my face when,
at first glance, a small
leaf appeared to be a toad.
I smiled at the bicyclist,
then I smiled at the squirrel
scrambling to get out of his way.
And other people who also
enjoy an early morning walk -
I smiled at them, too.
Now, sitting on the front porch,
the cool breeze chatting with me
before the afternoon heat settles in,
I find myself smiling at you, Dear Reader,
traveling through this poem I scratch.
A poesy so eager it can hardly wait to say,
“Hello!”
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Rough draft
Critiques
Rita
3 days 7 hours ago
Hello
Hello to you too
I can just picture the scenes as I too enjoy my daily walks. The imagery takes me there.
Lavender
3 days ago
Hello, Rita,
My morning walks always bring about a more cheerful feeling.
Thank you for reading!
L
Rula
3 days 2 hours ago
Nice little walk dear friend…
Nice little walk dear friend.
Enjoyed as always dear. Thank you for sharing.
Lavender
3 days ago
Hello, My Friend!
So good to see you here! You know I always appreciate you!
Hope you are well!
Lx
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