Skumpfsklub

Member since March 29, 2008

Member for 18 years, 2 months

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Bubble bath

Posted Feb 3, 2010 · 6 lines · 6 critiques

It's sudsy in the tub and warm.
The bubbles have a friendly form.
The room is quiet, clean and bright.
A Lowenbrau near on my right
stands by in case I start to thirst.
Perhaps I should have disrobed first.

Skumpfsklub’s timeline

March 2023
28 Tue

Anniversary
15 years of membership
March 2018
28 Wed

Anniversary
10 years of membership
March 2013
28 Thu

Anniversary
5 years of membership
February 2010
13 Sat

Received a critique
on The poem review of Damocles from @orgami
"I give an extra star for comment although there is no change in original ol poem still its good to see that this is a workshop and not all work can be expected to be rolled out without some detailing notification I knew…"
08 Mon

Received a critique
on Bubble bath from @Kailashana
"LOL. Oh, no you aren't you keep taking baths in your clothes. Trying to save water? Soap? Both? Tiny bubbles... in the water...Pop! ~A"
05 Fri

Received a critique
on No, those pants look good on you from @themoonman
"My standard answer is "you look lovely", the bad thing is she doesn't believe me anymore. The poem is ok for me, has some spots where it could be improved for flow of the tongue, I see your meter is important, ten sylla…"
03 Wed

Posted a poem
Bubble bath
"It's sudsy in the tub and warm."
Open thread 6 lines
01 Mon

Posted a poem
Bleed a little, too
"All you do is open a vein"
Open thread 26 lines
January 2010
25 Mon

Posted a poem
The Skumpf Sklub Saga (an incomplete work)
" The sea retreats and leaves on land the germ of Skumpf Sklub's soul A seething heap upon dark sand, obsidian and coal"
Open thread 20 lines
March 2009
28 Sat

Anniversary
One year of membership
April 2008
21 Mon

Most-discussed work
The Battle of Squeamish Hill

16 critiques to date.
15 Tue

Highest posting month
April 2008 — 20 poems
March 2008
30 Sun

First critique offered
on "Guilty Designs" by @Abstrakt
29 Sat

First publication
Hawks aloft
28 Fri

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.