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Trouble
Member since March 17, 2017
Member for 9 years, 2 months
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Monday was her name
Monday was her name
She would've encompassed, the smiles and cries
With the summary, of many week’s gone bye,
Her predecessor is the Sunday when I decide.
To let Monday be the beginning
of a better life.
Trust is a part Monday’s lies.
But Sunday is when the truth can survive.
Believing in thyself is always compromise.
A good night sleep will give you the direction
you need to find
Trouble’s timeline
- June 2026
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07 SunCritiqued
"The way of man" by @flj011278
"Hey frank I sincerely hope this poem isn't factual what a journey too live for a child A Good hard hitting piece of writing" -
07 SunCritiqued
"The way of man" by @flj011278
"Hey frank I sincerely hope this poem isn't factual what a journey too live for a child A Good hard hitting piece of writing" -
07 SunReceived a critique
on Monday was her name from @patrickgadoury
"Writing Monday poetry on a Sunday feels personally rude, so thanks for that. Jokes aside, I like the idea here. Monday almost feels like a person promising a better life, while Sunday is the last honest room before the…" -
07 SunNew follower
@patrickgadoury
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07 SunReceived a critique
on STUPID OR IGNORANCE STUPID OR IGNORANCE from @patrickgadoury
"This feels like a rough thought-poem fighting with itself, which kind of fits the title. The line that hit hardest for me was “My stupidity, is my comprehension” because that actually feels like the heart of the piece…" -
07 Sun
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07 Sun
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05 FriCritiqued
"Where Summer and Winter Meet " by @RJ Bear
"I must say that the title caught me so I had to read it. I love the metaphors of the summer and winter it was very smooth to read Good job" -
05 Fri
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04 ThuCritiqued
"To kill a man ll" by @Cpwe Skele
"I love the flow of this poem the words kinda sing in the rhymes sorry I can't give you any technical advice" -
02 TueReceived a critique
on If my face didn’t have a name from @Cpwe Skele
"Trouble, Clear and concise, I like how you were able to vividly describe your current/past state of mind. I would love to read more—if you would ever care to expand on it. Watch out for grammar. Thank you, Cpwe" - May 2026
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31 Sun
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23 Sat
- March 2026
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27 FriNew follower
@Lavender
- October 2025
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31 FriNew follower
@Trouble
- April 2025
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20 Sun
- June 2024
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30 Sun
- March 2024
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25 Mon
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21 Thu
- February 2024
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01 ThuReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Geezer
"get to reply sooner, but one thing and another... Ya know how it goes. So glad to have one of my old compadres back on the site. I hope to see you a lot more. We have grown a bunch bro. Be glad to see you take advantage…" - January 2024
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30 TueReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Candlewitch
"first point: you have the title of the poem on it three times, which distracts form the enjoyment of reading. (and I did enjoy it!) Great ideas employed. good language usage. The final line rings a note of discord... it…" -
30 TueReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Geezer
"with the AI on the points discussed but feel that you have made a good connection between the reader and the poet. Work on that meter. ~ Geezer. ." -
30 TueReceived a critique
on I am no more or no less from @Lavender
"This is soft and quiet. An "in the moment" reflection. So many deep thoughts, but a universal, simple affirmation. May I suggest making the sentences even in length? It would make the poem a bit easier for the reader to…" -
29 Mon
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25 ThuCritiqued
"Romeo and Juiliette" by @Shelby Pryor
"I loved the rhythm of the words it was easy to read while keeping me interested in the subject of the poem" -
22 Mon
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11 Thu
- April 2023
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06 Thu
- March 2023
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29 WedCritiqued
"Yours or Mine" by @RoseBlack
"My name is pressley nice to meet you. Reading your poem i had to add a comment . The structure of your poem opened my mind because of the first paragraph it was like a review to a movie. And you didn't waste time with y…" -
27 Mon
- November 2022
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19 SatCritiqued
"A POEM TO MY CHILDHOOD SELF" by @Mr joghe
"I think the last paragraph should've been the first one to me these words would have opened up more of a meaning for the reader to follow. Peace and blessings to you But question was the teacher your mate" - October 2022
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23 SunNew follower
@Mr joghe
- July 2022
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15 FriHighest posting month
July 2022 — 5 poems
- March 2022
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17 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2018
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17 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2017
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30 Thu
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19 SunFirst critique offered
on "Merry Christmas Mama ( I post this every year)One more year..." by @Rett
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17 FriFirst publication
What the hell (since unpublished)
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17 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
To thy own self be true.
Location: Detroit Mi
Favorite Poets
my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music
Recent Work
Who is a friend
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Me or love
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JJ
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JJ
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What life means to me
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Difference faces
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Mirror
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There's no reason why
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My journey
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