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twg
Member since November 16, 2013
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HOPE
I perceived her beauty as serene and calm as the ocean,
smooth like it was carved out of a different clay portion.
Poetry condoned from wide thoughts above.
And caught up in higher heights out of reach.
Searching for answers to mysterious questions beneath the earth.
These things are out of sight, yet I fight with all thy might, hoping one day, solutions will creep to my door steps, and offer solution tips, so I can take wild leaps of faith.
She represented everything therein, and I knew from the very scratch that we were certain like destiny indeed.
Her thoughts were cemented within,
her heart is what was out of reach, yeah though I stretch all forth to catch a drop of every heart spewed ink.
Tripping on mats, walking sheepishly,
Throbbing on palms to catch a glimpse of the passing beauty. I realized I've dreaded a never returning path of a mysterious mystery.
Faith had my heart entangled, if not I'd have called it myth.
The hope mounted within kept me holding on unto those clustered belief, vowed not to alter my feelings for it knew no other but you...
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16 ThuAnniversary
10 years of membership
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16 FriAnniversary
5 years of membership
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16 SunAnniversary
One year of membership
- October 2014
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- February 2014
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25 TueReceived a critique
on I MISS YOU from @wesley snow
"However, I must concur that shortcuts in spelling (even things like "Mr.") detract from the poem's legitimacy. Write what you feel, but write it in long hand and it will be taken more seriously. This poem deserves it. A…" -
25 TueReceived a critique
on I MISS YOU from @raj
"I am sure you would take into account valid suggestions by Rula and Jess. Your poem is touching and can sense overwhelming emotions... Regards," -
25 TueReceived a critique
on I MISS YOU from @weirdelf
"I have little to add except to be a little tougher. Those ellipses really need to go, they distract and detract rather than adding to the poem. And please, please never use 'u' for 'you', it might save time in text mess…" -
25 TueReceived a critique
on I MISS YOU from @Rula
"Please read here a short but very informative blog by sir Wesley Snow about these little dots http://www.neopoet.com/wesley-snow/blog/thu-2014-02-20-0731 I stay awake at the break of dawn Reminiscing about (the) early s…" -
25 Tue
- November 2013
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20 WedReceived a critique
on the hidden thought from @Lonnie
"Perhaps a bit beyond my scope of understanding, but intriguing none the less! Keep on keeping on!" -
20 WedReceived a critique
on the hidden thought from @Ian.T
"Logic prevailed, now sense has returned.. A good theme, would need another poem to show more feelings. Know how you feel with that one glance across a void. Like touching something that you know will hold you always, Yo…" -
19 TueReceived a critique
on the hidden thought from @Ian.T
"Sorry could not understand these two lines the logic left me some place, I shall await your reply then re read and critique better, Yours Ian.T Who could i his right senses, discard its thoughts, forget its impart and t…" -
19 Tue
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17 SunFirst publication
FLATTERY
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17 SunPosted a poem
FLATTERY
"As fuzzy clouds convene in the blue sky, Flames of passion burn with bliss nd ecstacy in my inner being nd as crisp chilly nd serene winds assuage the heavy heart of mine, A sentimental sensation of felicity rudderlessly arouses my stoical spirit. Fountain of hospitality Queen of ravishing beauty Beauty like the glow of the moon What eyes of glistening light radiation Before your presence, A poor slave of your beauty A migrant from the other side of time Searching, since time immemorial Just to see what a precious gem you are Now that I've beheld your beauty I will stay till the end of time... **inspired by the cathedral** ... twg..." -
16 SatJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 1 days later.
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the short rightie born with the midas touch
Location: Koforidua, GHA
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