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WAKING RHYME (rhyme patterns revision on weirdelf's poem)
ORIGINAL
I didn't sleep again today
but that is my usual way
i might write giddily and sway
it doesn't mean I've gone away pattern :aaaa
So I'll get up and walk around
for no purpose i can see
my general premise isn't sound
but I'll be the best that I can be pattern : abab
so wash and eat
is a good start
and a resounding fart
represents a stunning feat pattern : abba