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Godweed
Member since June 23, 2009
Member for 16 years, 11 months
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excruciation
i have
incredible
moments of
clarity
it’s not
unlike
being high
a sound can
trigger lost
remembrances
a scent
drifting ages
half forgotten
wisping by
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i sense
indelible
depths of
reality
it’s just
so hard
to describe
patterns shift
bring back past
intolerances
dreamers
sifting pages
so well hidden
live a lie
i weep
intangible
from what you
ask of me
it’s not
unlike
bleeding dry
accusations
breed such doubt
insecurity
lovers
losing face now
in angry moments
boast denial
i am
oppressible
my life a
tragedy
always
alone
deprived
words once said
regreted
open heart
broken
losing clarity
muddied by hurt
pass love by
i bear
excruciable
moments of
frailty
i feel
so torn
reviled
sad ghosted
distant
memory
fearful
hoping hands
clutch at straws
is this a lie?
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One year of membership
- January 2010
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31 SunReceived a critique
on excruciation from @weirdelf
"why has this received no comments for 3 weeks, what are you giving to your reader? I like the structure. Cheers, Jess, reprehensibly irrepressible" -
08 Fri
- December 2009
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20 SunReceived a critique
on in the aftermath from @Kailashana
"Duh. Sometimes I can't see the forest for the trees. Soul low. PERFECT!! And Jayne, you vocalized it. ~A Don’t let your victories go to your head, or your failures go to your heart." -
20 SunReceived a critique
on in the aftermath from @Seren
"I read the comments above and had a thought for the soul low line? ... how about eyes low the valley before would shadow eyes :) but a really good write I enjoyed thank you kind regards love Jayne x x" -
05 Sat
- August 2009
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30 Sun
- June 2009
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28 SunFirst critique offered
on "Sacrificial Lamb" by @Rett
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24 WedFirst publication
the highway
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22 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 2 days later.
About Me
Location: Canada
Recent Work
excruciation
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what am i trying to say here?
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coffee contemplations
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until now...
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in the aftermath
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sinusoid
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immalleable
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cognitive dissonance
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rant
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in-sight
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