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eager to be slim
because he wants her to be thin

shes a rake
that dont need the cake
(let them falsehood bitchs eat dat)

and he dangles girls by her
streamline designer
draws her in
adjusting to win

and the boys are falling
hard as chrome
soft as rain
because they love the way
she shows the pain

they want to be her
brand new stain

but deep down
theres an angel
dark from heaven
fields
the slain

the wings are
dripping white
as down

to steal sweet
innocence the crown

and all the while torn
all around
like wolves
to red
the running white

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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judyanne

judyanne

13 years ago

liked the write

without being aware that it was about alice white

love it knowing this

you've done it yet again esker
love judy
xxx

Esker

Esker

13 years ago

alice white....

not of Lewis Caroll the mathmetician turned writer
whose works were illustrated by an illustrator who
drew for the LONDON TIMES

lewis Caroll in my study was an oddity
his collection of personal interests are not mine

The Alice white of mine
searched the troposhere
Backscatter gaze

people whom are faded
with history pain time
they are ghosts in their Now
the are poetry without words

Lewis wrote for someone
where in my
life
the Alice's Ive worked for
are real

they are beautiful

Thank You!