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Oct 18, 2012
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CERULEAN
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lay beneath the crest of a dream
troposphere grave
glean of a hot scene
the frost fire sheen
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 9 months ago
Steve
A gain words that hold so much in their being, a beautiful range of Blue spread throughout the thoughts of the writer, where the comments are much longer than the write LOL
Yours Ian.T
Esker
12 years 8 months ago
a dawn
we see just the arch of morning
on the bottom of the troposphere
and it looks like a hot sunny morning
in pictures
but in reality its that cold fire
the ice on everything
the crisp clear clear air
that makes everything jump out!!