Music

Firstly Welcome to Neopoet site and I hope that you can bring to us the rhythm of Kenya, there are several poets here that are from many places in Africa, and it enhances the feelings we have by Knowledge of your ways..
I like your writing and the ideas behind them, though I felt that you have the feel for rhythm and rhyme.
I felt on this one I was reading a shopping list for such a theme, you have gone through most of the aspects of music now let your thoughts feel the sounds and put them on paper:-

( magical
splendor that vibrates the air
with rainbow colors that only
the young at heart can see)

This is the part that gives out that vibrant feelings of the magic of the universal music, Yours Ian.T

i think it needs a tiny cull, so i have written it out with the words i would delete in brakets

just imo i stress

It is a language
 that the heart
 understands no matter the age,
 (as the body moves freely
 to its tunes)

It is a bridge between Earth
 and Heaven, making people
(to) witness (the) stars twinkling
 in unison in a clear, night sky,
 as (the) trees sway to (the) magical
 splendor that vibrates the air
 with rainbow colors (that) only
the young at heart can see

It is a web that connects
 every single thing in the Universe
 to a rhythm that can surpass
 past, present and future,
 making our inner joy timeless

We don’t need (to have) a radio,
 a stereo, or an instrument to listen
 to vibrant and colorful tunes; all
 we (just) need (to) do is (to) close
 our eyes, relax, meditate and hear
 the Universe playing (the tunes)
 (of) harmony (back to us)

and 'splendor' spell check? - i may be wrong and it may be american spelling - but english/ australian spelling is splendour'

love judy
xxx

Poetry that focusses on beauty, love, spirituality to me denies the ugliness in the world

I deeply respect your sentiment, however this is what all good people believe.
My humble suggestion is to include the ugliness and offer real, informed political suggestions.