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Eduardo Cruz
Eduardo Cruz
Dec 20, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

The Blink (edited earlier post)

When does the end begin?
A child is born,
The blink of an eye
Taken at a ripe old age
The end is with you
From the start.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: original: "When does the end begin? You'll never win, the end is with you from the start"

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York City, N.Y. Spanish Harlem, USA

Favorite Poets: P. Neruda, Jose de Diego, E. Dickenson, R. Frost, there are many more, but these had the greatest influence...

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Comments

mand

mand

14 years 7 months ago

Hello Eduarlo

Born to die - make the most of life while we have it, cos it goes in the blink of an eye.

Profound and thought provoking.

Love Mand xxxxxx

Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

14 years 7 months ago

mand

thank you so much and to you also,
Yes, Yes, and Yes!!
Always Eddie

Hooded Stranger

Hooded Stranger

14 years 7 months ago

Eddie

Eddie,

I really liked this piece. It reminded me of a poem by China Blue called 'Shooting Star' which gave the thought that we are dying from the minute we are born...your piece also gave me that thought:

http://new.neopoet.com/node/302

I guess that outlook is a little depressing, but it is true.

Thanks for sharing this one my friend,

HS