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Dec 20, 2010
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Artists
Everyday losers possessing ability
to pretty up the bullshit;
or send it flaming
in vibrant cohesion's
restoring the reasons
for bypassing the banality
of everything, other than
the naked meaningful moment
and place it for all who see.
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
themoonman
14 years 6 months ago
Hiya Shirley...
thanks for reading ... I hope all is well on your side of the water.
Kailashana2
14 years 6 months ago
Yeah, well, so much for much
Yeah, well, so much for much ado about nothing.
;-)
Hug,
~
themoonman
14 years 6 months ago
Hi Anna ...
ain't that the truth.
thanks
lou
14 years 6 months ago
ouch
ouch
lou
themoonman
14 years 6 months ago
Lol....
How are ya Lou?
mona
14 years 6 months ago
Burning as hell "ouch
Burning as hell "ouch.
I would love to know what is your inspiration
love it too much
"enjoyable,simple, and well written".
themoonman
14 years 6 months ago
Hello Mona ...
Life my dear, Life. I am a big fan of the arts, and if history tells us
anything about artists, whether it be poets, painters, musicians ...
most struggle during their entire lives, and are never known, some
are ... but usually after they are dead. This dedication is given to
the artists that have captured the beauty of Life's moments, and
given of themselves and their beings, and to all that ever will.
thank you Mona for reading and asking your question
Richard
ziggy
14 years 6 months ago
hi again
hello your responce to mona, i like wat your saying there
the first couple of lines says it all in this one lol
havea great xmas , wishes from ireland to you ,,,,,,,,zigs
Candlewitch
14 years 6 months ago
Dear Richard,
I'm with Ziggy on this one, but my wishes come from southern Wisconsin.
love, Cat
Hooded Stranger
14 years 6 months ago
Richard
Richard,
this has to be one of your best.
Perfectly short but with enough content to be fulfilling.
I love the message you are conveying here.
You have wishes from Ireland and South Wisconsin, so not to leave you out, happy new year wishes from Stonehenge UK.
regards,
HS
Victorclaude
14 years 6 months ago
Reminds of the old maxim:
Reminds of the old maxim: "You can't bullshit a bullshitter!" Or, you have been spotted.
Pretty cool write!
Victor