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Dec 05, 2012
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The Reluctant Bride
The reluctant bride
a gun at her side
last night she cried
"never again" she sighed
today stands with false pride
smiling but dying inside
her groom petrified
her father feels justified
her mother mortified
her pregnancy they deride
the reluctant bride
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Seren
12 years 7 months ago
ello Sue
I rather like this ... short but telling a whole other story
nicely done I have no suggestions
sincerely JC
sueb
12 years 7 months ago
Hi Jc glad u like this little
Hi Jc glad u like this little one nice to hear from u
kind regards
Sueb