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Dec 07, 2012
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of human creativity
thou makest me feel
indispensable
maybe ,indisposable
may, what else
ingarbageable
but I'm glad many Neopoets follow you
and
the stamp of
free verse
which
is no curse
let it rest about my shoulders,
we are all trained to carry heavy boulders,
the Taj Mahal wouldn't have ever been built
unless guys like you and I
weren’t made to
under the over weights
be killed
but for a monument of that stature,
I shall once again lay
and
with the might of creative human player
happiness display,
albeit,
it may be some other day
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Seren
12 years 7 months ago
ello loved
long time no read I see your still writing your comments into poetry
nicely done as usual ;)
~JC
loved
12 years 7 months ago
Yeah and thanks
not much knowledge about poetry composing ,
so i use my minds
jugglery
glad you like it
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
Reflexivity
is masturbation.
This poem is nonsense.
loved
12 years 7 months ago
cheers ...would've
missed ur lovely wonderful and sexy comment
that's what makes it more soulful
weirdelf
12 years 7 months ago
ok, it has it's good points,
but please never use caps, it demeans your poetry, your words should be enough.
Sorry for being so mean
loved
12 years 7 months ago
you are sincere in your advice
which alone I like .Caps was for another site
I have removed