deep hurt

A deep hurt!

at times my heart weeps,
though rarely
when I see machinations
manifested in crooked minds,
seeking the fish from under the Dead Sea
when all are asleep,
wantonly
and
in pity seek a false admiration
to reach out for empathy,
callous folks still exist
I hate to say
but still

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Rula

12 years 7 months ago

I can

very much relate to this . Palestine , syria and many other places are suffering and we can't do anything but weeping.
Thanks for sharing.

loved

12 years 7 months ago

yes each one of us should be able

to relate to this
at some time of one's life
as much as you do tooo

pleiades

12 years 7 months ago

this is a poem where your

this is a poem where your unique writing
style really works.
so often, for me, it doesn't...sorry

the first thing that struck me about this, was
the sense of honesty it contains.
after reading this, there was no doubt in my mind
you meant what you wrote. and, you've expressed
those feelings cohesively, and eloquently

it's a sentiment that could be felt about a
myriad of situations the world over

i very much enjoyed this
thank you

cheers
p

loved

12 years 7 months ago

I am indeed indebted to you

grateful thanks

Ian.T

12 years 7 months ago

Loved

Just like reading a quatrain from some well known Doctor, A little puzzlig but the truth of things that will and do happen.
Well written young Bard, Yours Ian.T