CIRCLES

I rode on steeds two
black in a sky indigo blue.
hooves sparkling fire
across the universe
higher and higher they flew
me
to the ends of places new.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: USA

Comments

Ian.T

12 years 6 months ago

Joe

A neat little dream, though a projection of feelings "great"...
Just an edit to the Road to make it Rode.
You take care and I hope that a feeling of peace fills you as you enjoy this season, and light another candle for me I will see its warmth, Yours Ian.T

Geremia

12 years 6 months ago

Thanks, Ian :)

loved

12 years 6 months ago

lovely poems

all of yours
I really enjoy and learn anew
from you

Geremia

12 years 6 months ago

and i appreciate your

and i appreciate your comments.i do read bur been unable to respond as would like.i enjoy ur work, my friend, and admire how much you have grown, ur poetry has an underlyimg music of hope and joy of living..
be well.,

loved

12 years 6 months ago

thank you ever so much

its indeed an honour
to read such a eulogy