Virus

Which sort of virus would I like to have?
on my computer damaging my work?
on my text phone spying on me?
Or one placed in my body by lust?

Of all of these if I were to rave
I'd prefer the one with the perk
Except if the virus was HIV
And was a betrayal of trust

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Trying to emulate the rhyming in Pippa's song by Robert Browning.did I get a similar style?

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Uk south east London

Favorite Poets: Wilde, Keats, Shakespeare, Benjamin Zephaniah , Browning Elizabeth Barrett and Robert, Turkish poetry, rudyard Kipling, arctic monkey song lyrics, Pam Ayres, Donne, Beatles Simon and Garfunkel song lyrics

Comments

weirdelf

12 years 6 months ago

Well the rhyming style matched

So what ? What were you thinking?

The poem works on its own.

I once had unprotected sex with someone I knew was a whore junkie, the romance being if she had it, I wanted it too. Yeah, sick, I know.

Frenchf

12 years 6 months ago

Thanks lovely

I'd worry about a death wish even for love although Romeo and Juliet was such