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Jan 02, 2013
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Can't
I'm not able, I won't, I can't
this is the weak person's chant
makes me want to rant
try to stay calm but I can't
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
12 years 6 months ago
oh go and listen to some Tony Robbins tapes or something
this poem is almost as lame as my last one.
sueb
12 years 6 months ago
thanks Jess who's Tony
thanks Jess who's Tony Robbins
weirdelf
12 years 6 months ago
He is one of those "ispirational, motivational" spealers
I despised the concept for a long time but his ideas are pretty cool
Anthony Robbins downloadable.
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
I am not registered to critique
But I agree with Jess.this is well below your normal level of skill xx
sueb
12 years 6 months ago
no problem french f thanks
no problem french f thanks for reading and commenting all the best sueb x