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Jan 04, 2013
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Worries from past
sabotaging present
old memories
haunting tapestries
woven into now
wish they'd take a bow
and exit stage door
don't want them anymore
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
Well done back on track
Interesting that when temporarily depressed the quality of your work fell
sueb
12 years 6 months ago
thanks a mil x
thanks a mil x
Seren
12 years 6 months ago
I like this one Sue I can't
I like this one Sue I can't find anything to crit
Well done
Jc ~
sueb
12 years 6 months ago
thanks a mil so glad u
thanks a mil so glad u enjoyed this little one all the best cheers sueb x