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Jan 11, 2013
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"Flarty" blue
Jazzy blue,
movie blue,
Bluish hue,
who is blue
boogaloo
Toodle oo
Seems like dew
Had it too
Bolt from blue
Cried boo hoo
Dozy do
Liked it whooooo
Lastly blue
Stuck like glue
To u
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I M never going to do this again. Does not test my intelligence or creativity but 'twas educational and interessant.thanks to Kitty Mchale
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
Too true
No I don't drink after hearing alcohol was converted to aldehyde in the body. If someone said to you" would you like a glass of aldehyde?" I'd say
" no thanks mate"
But frequently get drunk on my high spiritedness
Xx
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
SyllabubCould read "not to you"
The last line but then I may have to go and look for someone else or dedicate this to Sue b!
Ian.T
12 years 6 months ago
Frechf
Some of my friends are high spirits but that's another story,
Yours Ian.T
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
Haha love it xxx
Amazing what a spin you can put on words!
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
Haha love it xxx
Amazing what a spin you can put on words!
Ian.T
12 years 6 months ago
Frenchf
I have a friend in spirit, a child that repeats everything you say to her she is so lovely, while talking to her I always try to make her make a mistake, it is a tug of war and we both had fun, I miss the talks with them, though Sadie came in last evening but they are very busy..
What goes around comes around is that a spin, but if the goldfish takes more than four seconds to swim around his bowl does he get lost..
Only playing have a lovely evening out there, yours, Ian.T
Jenifer James
12 years 6 months ago
Oh hahaha - so are some of
Oh hahaha - so are some of mine.
Nordic cloud
12 years 6 months ago
Boo hoo,
Boo hoo,
fetch the glue.
A fun nonsensical rant.
Ann
Ian.T
12 years 6 months ago
Frenchf and Ann
For our Ann flour and water for a mix of glue
Keeps wall paper up will see you through
Though not getting stuck up is quite an art
Don't cook with it it will make you (have Flatulence)
Used it with knitting needles and crinkly paper
Made a beautiful calendar for my Mater
Pater said could I make him something too
Made him a pair of shoes that soon wore through
He said to me that will do,
Have a lovely time where ever you are,
Yours Ian.T
Nordic cloud
12 years 6 months ago
That's a rip roaring good
That's a rip roaring good reply Ian,
LuvAnn
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
Paper mâché'
Fantastic stuff. I've got a bowl made from the newspaper glue mix( flour and water) has lasted 10 years.
loved
12 years 6 months ago
Bolt from blue
is it you
I thought twas I only
nice and silly
Frenchf
12 years 6 months ago
Actually it was your bolt
That started me off on this and kitty's flirty blog!