Inevitable

a great piece. the word usage is great and it reads with emotions of great pain for the things that will be lost. it pains to love and lost! beautiful poem!

good insightful piece about modern man's alienation "our sitting room" (internet cafe) - "is stifling, smothering communication". How true too, "the vacant stares" and "minds elsewhere".
I think it would carry more impact here and there, if you used punctuation more effectively viz.
"Don't know what to do,
but attention I need.
Before, 'incomprehensible'
Now, 'understandable'..."
See how that works for you!
Regards

I hope this is just a poem, its a sad tale of a marriage breaking up or on the verge of serious problems, I thought this one bared a little of your soul, its how we get to know each other round here, bit by bit our stories come out in our poetry to some degree

nice work hun

love JC xxx