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Jan 26, 2013
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Never-ending Story
Blossomed daffodils
gracing windowsills
bluebells bloom
lighting the gloom
fields of green
lush and serene
silver birch trees
whistling in the breeze
natures glory
never-ending story
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
sueb
12 years 5 months ago
nature
nature
Seren
12 years 5 months ago
Natures story
Natures story
never-ending glory
just another way those two lines could go nice nature poem Sue
Jayne-Chloe xxx
sueb
12 years 5 months ago
thanks glad you enjoyed this
thanks glad you enjoyed this little one x