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Dec 23, 2010
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Starlight
STARLIGHT
For you, my love, this Christmas time,
I only have this simple rhyme.
Though you, my love, deserve much more,
(You are the one that I adore)
If all the skies were empty; black,
No moon or stars to light your track,
Then I could set some sparkling stars
To light your way where 'ere you are.
And following your paths you'd see...
That every one leads back to me.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Western
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
mand
14 years 6 months ago
So sweet and romantic.
Lovely sentiments, brilliant rhyming and meter.
Loved reading this one.
Love Mand xxxxxx
Tam the Chanter
14 years 6 months ago
romance
Glad you liked it, Mand. It should save me a fortune in christmas presents lol.
Merry Christmas !!
Ian xxx
Kailashana2
14 years 6 months ago
Lol. (Expect her to expect a
Lol. (Expect her to expect a present under the tree.)
Lovely thought...."every path leads back to me." How long have you been married? Bless you both.
hugs,
Anna
Tam the Chanter
14 years 6 months ago
lucky
At a party in Edinburgh, 1968, I met Anne. We were married in September 1969. thanks for the kind words Anna,
Merry Christmas !!!
Ian xx
Tam the Chanter
14 years 6 months ago
Paths
Shirl, thank you for the encouraging words. I hope Santa is good to you
MERRY CHRISTMAS !!!
Love Ian xxx
Tam the Chanter
14 years 6 months ago
sonnet
I would sonnetise it if it flowed freely, but it seems to have the life-span that it has and I really don't want to pad it out . Thanks for the interest though and the suggestion. Really glad you like it,
Ian