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Jan 31, 2013
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BRAVO… that's what spirit is all about
BRAVO… that's what spirit is all about
a challenge to those who know
that this way they shan't walk again
even alone….
so be thyself
let the world go to hell ,
we have to live
the life ordained
so let it not be by our weakness stained
for tomorrow is definitely preordained
how….
none can that say
but heart within does display,
a desire that's what Loved can now say..
the hour appointed
has not yet been anointed
time has a time of its own
a watch to mankind yet unknown
unless the scientists invent
a switch off
switch..
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 5 months ago
these are great words
thank you
loved
12 years 5 months ago
thanks friend
2 U 2
Ian.T
12 years 5 months ago
Good piece of quiet shout,
Good piece of quiet shout, just the one line that I couldn't find
Rhyme or reason for, LOL
none can that say = None can say that now.
Take care young Bard, Yours Ian.T
loved
12 years 5 months ago
IN POETRY
we should at times
ignore rhyme reason and grammar
have you ever read
Urdu /Hindi poets
they use their names like
Mirza Ghalib world renowned
alive till today.
and for years hereafter they all say.