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Feb 11, 2013
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hello geremia
emotional courageous and so true
we all still love you..
your words of wisdom
so fresh anew
as you slowly reach the horizon
which is far away in the distance
the dawn of light
sees another poem,
from you for us today...
many more shall and will come our way,
if you have a positive will
you'll much longer stay
and help mankind in all walks of life
in poetic armoury
be that today's
Neopoets fashionary....
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
weirdelf
12 years 4 months ago
Your kindness is palpable, Loved,
yet Joe has told us he is nearing his end. Don't enforce his denial, though it is true that hope and belief are of great power.
loved
12 years 4 months ago
it is 27th
is he or is he not?
weirdelf
12 years 4 months ago
27th?
He has been predicting his end for a while. Perhaps that's what keeps him going.
I have come to love his death wish, it probably keeps him alive.