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Feb 15, 2013
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the hill so far
The distant is greener
humans alone have to
and secretly cheat,
animals are open and free
they have no society...
so we being from the animal kingdom
inherit their genes
but society lays norms unknowingly,
as those who do so
are passed their teens
they are prone to forget
what current life really means
it’s all in ones genes
we look at the other side of the hill mostly
so darker and green
till we reach the end
but by then we all have been
seen!
can't help the man made malady
twill for ever be...!
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 5 months ago
Is this to do
With animal and human sexuality?
loved
12 years 4 months ago
the sexuality
of mind
any ones .....