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Feb 26, 2013
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Fetish fascination
Why does the slipper thrill you so?
Does the thigh sock make you rub down low?
And the whip brings you out in a right old sweat
The thought of the leather thong a frequent pest
What makes you warm in the parts down below?
Why do lace knickers give you a glow?
I will never understand the grip of the fetish
Some of them just make me feel so squeamish
Or should I be more grotesque and uncouth
And wish I'd had a salacious youth
Starting with handlings in the cupboard
Experiments with the excitement of rubber
Whipped by the man in a face gas mask
Forever perverted by my gruesome past
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Prompted by ephs thigh socks tale!
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Comments
lonlyhrtsclub13
12 years 4 months ago
love it
I think this is fantastic...there are so many different fetishes and so many ways to express them!!!
lonlyhrtsclub13
12 years 4 months ago
love it
I think this is fantastic...there are so many different fetishes and so many ways to express them!!!
godshouldnthave
12 years 4 months ago
owning desire.
I think you have said to yourself with this poem that you deserve to free your imagination a bit? Your comfort zone wants a bit of slack? That death may be at your door tomorrow and you still have some time left to accept that entertaining the abstract may be just what you need to better understand the acceptable and the tangible. Great subject matter. Good honest confusion. Push it harder....you know what eye mean :) ....it is your sick dream.... let it be beautiful and loud.
_Danny
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
will do danny
hope you are ok
weirdelf
12 years 4 months ago
I bet you $3.50 your were brought up Catholic.
I love your work!
Other people's fetishes/obsessions are completely incomprehensible to others, you know I have a thing for poodles, 12 volt teflon coated appliances and Ephraim Crud. And you, no offense.
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
usually attracted to gay men
all my life so yes definitely and no I havent included your teflon coated objects but this certainly is one!Lets hope you dont get a disease from them. A disease calleed Raynauds phenomenon occurs in workers using vibrating tools!
Ian.T
12 years 4 months ago
Frenchf
You know damn well all these things are a craft that we would all like to be a part of, but I wont talk about it or the gap that use to be there between the stocking tops and the brief encounter Rotflmao, That's why I hate tights.
There are some things other than religion that are sacred and held in the thoughts of Man/Woman, I will say no more in case the wife looks over my shoulder while I am typing, Yours, Le moineau
PS:- for Jess, My Step Daughter has a mini poodle is that a small naughty after thought LOL
lonlyhrtsclub13
12 years 4 months ago
I think
we all have fetishes and fantasies...some are just too scared to admit or discuss them. So many are taboo etc. If everyone would just let go of their inhibitions, society may not be wound as tightly.
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
thanks for reading
ill call