heaven earth.....life

but it turned out wise.

Not good poetry though, even freeform uses judicious prosodic values.

interesting...I skipped through caught a title and built my poem from this
the skies so full of falling snow light..never heavy but steady forever lately
beautiful and haunting...as your poem..

thank You!

Good trade hauling shit these days!!
see them trucks everywhere..!

:)

beg to differ loved...as an aussie, i "hold hands" with
a canadian wolf

i'm in two minds over this write.
i don't immediately see a lot of poetic value, but
then i think to myself, must every thought have poetic value?
can it sometimes not just be a thought?

that's what this reads like to me...a thought...a musing.
i have no problem with such, only when it tries to pass itself
off as a poem.
i like what you have to say, and agree with more than a couple
of points. on the first read, it seemed a little preachy, but
after a couple more reads, it didn't seem so at all

it's rather, like a peek at what loved believes

i enjoyed reading this

cheers
p

not a block with simple plains and sharp edges
turning
but a multi gem planed and firing beautiful
light

more smooth the expanse
over the territory of Neo Land
crinolean poems I like
and the straight from the hip
thoughts I love too

facets..perspectives

face cards number cards
boundary shots

vivid stuff

must go

Thank You!

heaven is not in an unknown place
they who preach of beyond
unearthed skies
none has ever seen
nor been

the earth is the place God so kindly made
if you can't create
nor equate it with heaven
why steps of altars do you pace ?

we have a chance
to dwell just once
make earth heaven or hell
tis up to us

I have flown into the wilderness
sky high
and always love to return
back to earth

my home is my heaven
my haven

...just me as you know loved
hugs
judy
xxx

I see you are going to edit so I'll withhold comment 'till then....................stan