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Mar 12, 2013
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"Wasting the While in Winter White Wash"
(The flesh like film). he washes the stop baths,
the fixture on elements desired.
But the radiation has crept in, A web of eyes upon
the house stolen.
The anger seeped in like roots of a tree,
atop a chimney lain seed.
Esker. March 12 2013.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
What is this write
About? Nice images but I couldn't make meaning
Esker
12 years 4 months ago
family propoganda
how dysfunnction like typhoid
slips in and makes a guest
of the house....
Thank You!
(how its washed over...rising like a dark water
until everyone learns how to swim in it...
the ballet of creatures....)
Rula
12 years 4 months ago
Very dark for me
even after that clarification . Perhaps playing a little with the title would make it easier .
I loved the image here though
The anger seeped in like roots of a tree,
A typo........dysfunnction
Esker
12 years 4 months ago
I like the title Rula....and Yes I am playing...all the W's
no one can catch it though
Who
What
Where
When
Why...
Fun in Dis function!!
there never really is
Is there?
...
Thank You!