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Mar 12, 2013
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Horse 25WL
Look not- towards the furyed pain
Turn horse- towards the sullyed swain
The riddle tangled in horses mane
Bet the devil, with thine eyes sane
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Wow words are fun .. I suspect some misspellings in this one but whatever 25 words long is what it means .. more mockery for stupid things
Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frenchf
12 years 4 months ago
Fried
Nd sullied?
Is there a riddle that I've not identified?
Esker
12 years 4 months ago
I like this work
Just the word flow sounds great..
I listen to music and I like the lyrics
and the old poetic masters and
modern
Just to get the mind working
or flexible.....
I enjoy the use of punctuation too
and I wrote a poem including
it in my works
Again I like this..
Thank You!
weirdelf
12 years 4 months ago
Cool, I appreciate any sully against stupidity
especially with lovely language. An aspect most often missing in poems I've read recently, which has made me a reluctant reader.