Me analysis

Sometimes I think
I am a bitch
In what I say
In words so rich
With cynicism and rhetoric
With harshness
Which makes you sick
And evil thoughts
Wishing death
On the worst
of my soul mates

And then the other side of me
Sycophantic trickery
Verbose jocose jollity
Elegance bathed with prudity
Lack of meanness sweetness dripping
Kindness oozing,soft voiced lipping
One of these is the real me
Which of these do you see?
My black and white personality
Jekyll and Hyde mixed easily

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Is everyone like this?is this what split personalities are?

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Uk south east London

Favorite Poets: Wilde, Keats, Shakespeare, Benjamin Zephaniah , Browning Elizabeth Barrett and Robert, Turkish poetry, rudyard Kipling, arctic monkey song lyrics, Pam Ayres, Donne, Beatles Simon and Garfunkel song lyrics

Comments

Seren

12 years 3 months ago

ello French

I really liked this one, I am not sure what I see I dont know you well enough lol I'll get back to you on that

good poem and I enjoyed the read

hugs Jayne-Chloe x

Josephus

12 years 3 months ago

The yin and yang of us all.

The yin and yang of us all. The truth of who we all are. I heard a story once of a small boy who asked his grandfather about his good and bad self. He wanted to which one he would grow to be. The grandfather said we each have two wolves within us the good and the bad that fight to win over each other. The boy asked which one would win. The grandfather said... The one we feed.

I'm not a literary technician.Structure, syntax, meter, rythm and rhyme are not my fort. I do know what I like and I like this one. I can feel the passion and authenticity in this. Well done by my measurement.

Joe

loved

12 years 3 months ago

are you

a dual sign
Gemini Saggy Piscean or Virgo
then I shall let you know
but till then
I must say
yourself never betray..

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Frenchf

A good write, and a bad write, Yours, Yenti, Sparrow and Ian.T.
He, He, He.. guess which belongs to me..