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Apr 02, 2013
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POETIC JUSTICE
POETIC JUSTICE ITS JUST US THIS IS MY FIRST POST AND ONLY POETS I JUST TRUST JUST POETS IS A MUST ITS LIKE A SEXUAL THRUST THE EXCITEMENT FULLFILLED ENJOYMENT TO DISCUSS ON PAPER POETIC JUSTICE READS WITH A RUSH POETRY TO ME IS LIKE A CHILDS FIRST CRUSH.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: POETIC JUSTICE KICKS UP DUST
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 6 months ago
K'Leen
Firstly welcome to Neopoet, I hope that you will enjoy your stay with us and that your works will evolve as most do into another stage of learning..
Let's get to the nitty, gritty, it is better to write in lower case, we will talk about your work later as you send more to the stream..
POETIC JUSTICE well sounds like you don't think poets receive Justice, well here you will be the same as the rest of us, walking with the freedom of words, learning of the art of writing and self expression.
I await your next pieces and probably an edit to your profile to let us know more about you,
Yours for now Ian.T
Nordic cloud
12 years 6 months ago
Then why have you written it
Then why have you written it as prose?
Do use both cases as the all capital is difficult to read.
Then we can judge your poem, and maybe do it justice.
Nordic Cloud.
William Saint George
12 years 6 months ago
Forgive me, but...
"Poetic justice
its just us.
This is my first post
and only poets i just trust
just poets.
Is a must
its like a sexual thrust
the excitement fulfilled
enjoyment to discuss on paper.
Poetic justice reads with a rush.
Poetry to me
is like a child's first crush."
It's just my way of looking at it. Now to the poem: I don't see poetic justice as you see it, but the thought is interesting.