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brittle light
By brittle light, 29 December, 2010

gecko on the sill
I sing, he stops to listen
at times, joining in

mand

mand

14 years 6 months ago

Hello Brittle light

I smiled as I read this lovely little haiku, visualising the scene.

A really enjoyable read. I have no crit to offer - I love it the way it is.

Thank you for sharing.

Love Mand xxxxxxx

S

scribbler

14 years 6 months ago

greetings

most geckos I know are head bangers not singers lol.Nice Haiku....................scribbler