Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
May 04, 2013
⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)
MASK
MASK
Where are the movers and shakers
the promises of better things
Where are the friends
where did the family ties go
who are these faces new
these bullies and these takers
who are these cannibals
feasting on my soul.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Geremia
12 years 2 months ago
:)
:)
Rula
12 years 2 months ago
joe
So many questions but unfortunatelly no answes. A good capture of this unmarciful life.
Geremia
12 years 2 months ago
Yes :)
Yes :)
Nordic cloud
12 years 2 months ago
a very well worded poem
Apart from what this is saying,
well not entirely,
it is a very well worded poem in my opinion;
as I see it was for Rula too.
Good show Joe, love Anni
Geremia
12 years 2 months ago
Takk, min Anni
Takk, min Anni