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May 05, 2013
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dying breed
the sunsets each day
be far or nearby
can't say
but tis always rising some way
like-wise poets read…
but to comment
shy away
not many like a pair
for so long do stay
as we two safely
with words only play
it needs courage by the way
on every pedestal
you can't place a statue
like one of you
anda bard combined
can you…..
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
12 years 1 month ago
Loved
I miss your poetry, this is one that is wanting attention from others, that you might just as well howl at the moon.
So if we take the others out of the equation then we can get down to writing great poetry with a little direction from the Masters lol,
Yours Ian.T
loved
12 years 1 month ago
when ever i see a numeral ...under my poem
I see you alone
IAN
none else enjoy
us two or both
but let us make
the best of most
at least each other
we ought to toast
which we two
usually do