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May 15, 2013
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U S E D * 2 * Y O U
causes to causes
we rushed
drowned in the heartless
growth gathered about
the ruins
VENA AMORIS
your soul rode
thin robed
plasmapheresis
winter eyes full and
still
a crawling winter night
widths
Love like increments
fingers on a hip
lust sick
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
eightmenout
12 years 2 months ago
I always get great imagery
I always get great imagery from reading your work, but sometimes I don't quite get the emotions. Is it that sometimes you mute the emotions or am I just missing something?
Esker
12 years 2 months ago
You are correct...
everything is changed..muted..like in a different language or dimension sometimes..
years of living like this.....everyone tells me..I am aware of this not just in my writing
but in my communicating with others also.....
Thank You! ...I am very happy the imagery is vivid though....
Shyanne18
12 years 1 month ago
Your Poety!!
Your poetry is so unique. I have never anything like it. Bravissimo!