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Forlorn Hope

In silence
I confide,
To a friend
I dare not,
I bit my lip
To stop myself
from opening
The door shut closed.
No...not before a strange
Or a confidante even,
No one must know!
I clung to one thing,
A coin of no value
To be exchanged
For a piece of bread
To satisfy this hunger
And silence the voices
Shouting back.
I dare not beg.
I am poor
But a beggar
I refuse!
For hunger,
A bread.
For thirst,
My tears.
For solitude,
The silence.
For hope,
But there's only despair.

About This Poem

Last Few Words: been having a hard time writing poems these days...talk about being caught in such a chaotic world of endless unfinished tasks.. I miss writing poems so much but I barely have the time T_T

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, USA, USA

Favorite Poets: I am inspired by poets who can depict the deeper depths of human emotions and soul. Simplicity captivates me as well. I have a special place in my heart for Oriental poems.

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Comments

Ian.T

Ian.T

12 years 3 months ago

Gardenia

A loss and refusal to give in, with an acceptance of reality all thrown in to a well written piece with no words wasted, well done.
Just sit and write for a while as if you were sleeping, then after have a look and sort what you have written.
Like auto writing I do this a lot and then edit for stream, you will soon get back to thoughtful writing, it is there but hidden, Yours Ian.T

The Rain Sprite

The Rain Sprite

12 years 2 months ago

Hi!

Hi there, Ian! Sorry for taking me so long to say my this. I often do auto writing even at work and just can't help. i miss poetry so much and glad to have some time to visit this site and share some stuffs I wrote.
Thanks so much!

Yours,
Gardenia