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Jun 20, 2013
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A limerick straight from my mind
composed on the run in chat Beau's "Off the cuff" chat
I need a longer extension
and it's not just anal retention
if the connection is broken
there's no adequate token
for means of seeking redemption
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Nordic cloud
12 years 3 months ago
This is so neat, clear cut,
This is so neat, clear cut, precise,
and it swings into the mind,
then swings out, just so.
Ann.
weirdelf
12 years 3 months ago
ta
Ann
Ian.T
12 years 3 months ago
Jess
Not Too keen on the Extension you had in your Limerick.
So I thought about it very quick.
Bad job saying Anal all I could think was what a pirk.
I know that typo's are very bad,
But your message seemed rather sad.
Now I have rewritten it I am feeling so Glad, La La
I put in for an extension
With all good intentions
They gave me some flex
To enhance my prospects
On which I made a mess
An extension was my intention
To wander my home on the phone
It didn't work,I felt such a jerk
I made it too short. UC
Yours Ian.T