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Esker
Esker
Jul 02, 2013 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

T A I L I N G Z

grist of structure
sharp form
the tinge of brittle
time about its
era

cast us
about
beneath fire suns
and tear spent storms

our arms have borne
our hearts have shrugged
the soul shun worlds
and realms
of all this
and that

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Ross Hamilton Hill

Ross Hamilton Hill

12 years ago

Hi there

a cut above most as usual, I'm still waiting for you to become famous,
just kidding,
success might blunt your edge.

I

ida

12 years ago

hence

Marlene Dietrich
I vant to be alone

fantastic Esker

body mind soul
pretzel
the glorious mystery shroud

lonlyhrtsclub13

lonlyhrtsclub13

12 years ago

The internal struggle

The push and pull of emotions, when the world keeps dealing you a bad hand, the desire to be left alone, very nicely displayed here. Your use of language is very powerful, as always. Nicely done.