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Jul 17, 2013
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Seasonal changes in one's life...Jess missed it hence EDIT
Seasonal changes in one's life.
give way to fresher encounters
all our lives
else life would have been
a monotonous rose
if it had no colors
nor variety
I suppose
the sun needs to show more worth
by giving nature a newer birth
and the rains ought to wash away
what you may call sin
the nudity,
stark nakedness autumn gives
must be once again recovered
as did Adam and Eve
so life's humanity and dignity
forever remains constant
yet not absolutely still
in life everything is cyclic
like yours and mine
coming and going,
really dynamic
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
lonlyhrtsclub13
11 years 12 months ago
Every season
a new beginning...a reason to start over...each one washes away the remnants of the season before it, to be replaced with traditional characteristics and altering the moods of society. Much like every day relationships, each one a new beginning, washing away what was left from another, replacing it with characteristics of its own...altering moods....
loved
11 years 12 months ago
thank you so very much
for your encouragement
shall write till some one
even one reads
in yahoo i had 5435 reads
of a single poem
here none know
who have seen
lonlyhrtsclub13
11 years 12 months ago
you could always
bring up the suggestion that Neo implement a counter to show how many views a poem has had. I know it appears on another site I use and is very helpful, even if there aren't many comments, at least your work is being looked at...
loved
11 years 12 months ago
So many have
but this site doesn't have the revised wherewithals
and they listen to just a guy
that's why neo is going down
not many read nor comment
except u scratch my back
i urs kind
so never mind.
lonlyhrtsclub13
11 years 12 months ago
i do
my best to get around, even though i do get preoccupied at times. Just keep plugging :)
loved
11 years 12 months ago
thanks
Carrie
lonlyhrtsclub13
11 years 12 months ago
:)
:)
Geremia
11 years 12 months ago
:):) WELL DONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!
:):) WELL DONE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
loved
11 years 12 months ago
thank you so very much
been missing ur comments
howz ur health
now better hopefully
I told u so
Ian.T
11 years 12 months ago
Loved
A very good write young Bard and well worthy of a lot of visits and praise.
The seasonal changes as with us is well portrayed.
Good to see so many others reading and leaving comments.
Well done, Yours Ian.T
loved
11 years 12 months ago
I too am feeling elated
wow so many
so suddenly