Quit or quite!

nice anger displayed
at a lover who crosses your way

and
Have signs to betray
and
take you astray,
if only you meant quit
to say
and
not remain quiet
till this final day

love is in the air
all in war and love is fair,
give him another chance
if you may

or
else quit immediately
as you now say

so do it right away
but not repent
anymore after today
quit if you wish to
just as you may

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

Loved

To quit is to let the other person win without a fight..
Bad news!!
I have a few more years of battles on the fields of poetry as yet.
Anyone gives me shit I shall come back and haunt them LOL
I remember the old saying about lovers..
If you love someone let them go.
If they don't come back, hunt them down and kill them lol.
Take ( No prisoners) care young Bard, what or who is this piece aimed at ???
Go well see you later, Yours Ian.T
Oh! the write wasn't too bad lol.

loved

11 years 11 months ago

some gal on another site

expressed anguish

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

Loved

thats good I thought my body armour was leaking lol,
Take care talk later, don't forget that normally an expression of anguish is usually a cry for help..
Yours Ian.T

loved

11 years 11 months ago

yeah you bet

so I tried to help

Ian.T

11 years 11 months ago

Loved

Just watch out
that your shields are up
as to walk in these ways
and become embroiled with love.
Is a minefield of emotion
that would make mush of you.
Take care young Bard know we are here with you,
Yours Ian.T

Roscoe Lane

11 years 11 months ago

I read,

I read everything that you write, but understand very little. This on the otherhand i like, the emotions and turmoil of love. That could have a double meaning lol, the poem or the poet. Regards Roscoe...

loved

11 years 11 months ago

at times I feel

even i don't know
what i compose but

A poet is one
who has ignited sparks
in anyone
and one such one is you
hopefully too