WINGS

Where are the wings you promised me
where is is the wind that will carry me
to the stars

where is the womb that will hold me
where are the voices that will lead me
far
into the light

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Country/Region: USA

11 years 11 months ago

the edge
the mirage of creativity and
ponder....

we live the lives of heartfelt
striving
conquests and the shadows
that give us profile

there is always more...

Thank You

11 years 11 months ago

we live the lives of heartfelt
striving
conquests and the shadows
that give us profile

This is poetry. Stunned by your imagery ,Steven.

Thank you,

Jow

11 years 11 months ago

Only you can take anger, doubt and fervent belief, give them timelessness, and pack them all into just 7 lines.

Damned good, brother, damned good.

11 years 11 months ago

Joe