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Sep 17, 2013
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LUNA :Italian/English
LUNA
Quando spunta ' a luna
piano piano me ne vado
sotto l' ombra pallida
come uno spirito smarrito
cecando i raggi del sole
MOON
when the moon rises
slowly I make my way
under its pale shadow
like a soul gone astray
searching for the rays
of the sun.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
MDT
11 years 10 months ago
bello
simplicie e bellissima, bravo
Geremia
11 years 10 months ago
Mille grazie !
Mille grazie !
Rula
11 years 10 months ago
Wonderful
and meaningful!
Ian.T
11 years 10 months ago
Joe
Beautifully written, thank you,
Yours Ian.T