i n e r t i a

tumult
the turn

gliding in the spin

alive with outstretched
wings
a chasm between
the worlds

of white
of black

not there
nor here

but in the ghost bridges
thundering
with wind
perplexed in rains
shivering
in the buffet
of passage
in a blink

like a mirror walk
to forgo
the future talk

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Comments

BettyBuff

11 years 9 months ago

'Ghost Bridges Thundering...'

Wow...your images are so lovely...'ghost bridges thundering with wind...'

I'm giving you a bell when I need to title my novel!

Kudos!

Ells x

Esker

11 years 9 months ago

Thank You BettyB

Now I can see titles from my paragraph line insertions in
the headers!

love this..reminds me of the old days
when they would ask us to delve out
the meanings as to what the poet
is really talking about

Kind of like profiling...
poetic speak of course!!

Ian.T

11 years 9 months ago

Steve

I n e r t i a,
streamed across the voids.
Spilling purpose,
giving definition.
Energy transformed
In the dance of life.
Loved this write as it depicted the effect, not the cause..
Yours Ian.T

Esker

11 years 9 months ago

Awesome ob again mr Ian!

so much of writing is to effect
or an affect

but causes...

another dimension of realms
and writes...

(sometimes wrongs...)