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Oct 14, 2013
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Driver in the dawn 'audio'
https://docs.google.com/file/d/0B1CDwQMLJs6QeHI0NFVpVjA2dnc/edit?usp=do…
The brightness
Of of car lights
Are as blinders
Covering my eyes
My lens out of focus
Obscured in the dawn
Descending on me
Before rising of the morning sun
The popping in my neck
Dull pain in my back
Weakness in my knees
Tingling in my legs and feet, seized me
My spirit reveals
Endurance at its best
A strained drive home
The morning light has arrived
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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loved
11 years 8 months ago
we ... Ian and I ..are trying to remove
We ... Ian and I ..
are trying to remove
the late- read stigma of poetry
as you can see ...
some poetry is left unseen
now a days for weeks ....
if you wish to be read
do read
another poet's creativity
please.
now do go and read older ones kindly
in the unseen gallery
A Neopoet's well wisher
lovedly
Barbara Writes
11 years 8 months ago
I shall do
My friends.